I love how the article jumps between all these different experiences - it's like a treasure map of Indy's hidden gems
. The author's writing style is so smooth and easy to follow, I wish more travel articles could be as clear and concise as this
. I'm definitely going to check out Loudmouth Books now - who knew there was such a great bookstore in the city?
And OMG, that gondola ride sounds like a dream come true
. One thing that's really bugged me is how the article jumps abruptly from writing about food to talking about kayaking and flower arranging... just a little formatting tweak would make it flow way better 